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This is the real "Thnks fr th mmrs".

You can not break what's already broken.
You can not shake what's already been shaken.
My heart has been ripped out, shattered and then
stomped on.
Then, after everything we've been through together,
after all we shared, after everything I gave you,
after all the memories we gave each other; this is the
thanks I get. You don't even call me anymore, never to say hello
or to see how I've been. I miss my best friend,
the one who doesn't have the compassion
to miss me.
We were once in love. I know we were, you and I both know that,
we both felt it and showed it.
You called me beautiful under the glowing Christmas lights.
Now, you act as if it never existed. But we both know it did.
Thank you for the memories.
But you can't break the broken.

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  • Antebellum
    November 13
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    Thank you for the memories.
    But you can't break the broken..
    ....
    wow such a powerful ending.
    thanks for entering.
    good luck