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I'm Still Here!

When lights go out,
Things disappear.
Why than,
Am I still here?

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Just kind of popped in my head. It is, as you can see, quite short and simple. However in its simplicity there truly is a greater thought behind it.

what are your personal thoughts on this matter?

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  • My Desdemona
    October 8

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    not bad, i know exactly how you feel, everyday i wish i was gone but it never happes, and i like how it's so straight forward, great write

  • luvhilton
    October 8

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    your right it is short but mainly i thought of the first thing tht popped into my mind... and i totaly get what yer trying to say. i feel the same way wen the lights go out now. good job and keep it up. =]