Perfect vision softly creeping
night by night, when I'm sleeping
Golden towers and gentle moonbeam
coming alive in every dream
I want to know, drives me insane
Town of my dreams, town with no name
A contest entry
- Please Tell Me In One Sentence? by UnbreakableSoul.
500 points, ended October 8, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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This looks like Tenerife to me looking towards the airport from Las Americas (horrible place).
A great sentence here that flows and rhymes perfectly.
Good luck in the contest
Lulu
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Very lovely. It was the sort of feeling I had when I looked at the contest. I am glad that I did not enter. I could not have come up with anything as beautiful. I loved the rhyme. Great job.
Mike
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hey, you've got some nice couplets there...(LOL)! very good rhyming-scheme and compliments the prompt. lotsa' luck with the contest...!
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