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Chance of Hope

Heaven is that moment
watching a shooting star,
the touch of baby's skin
or a whisper in the wind.

Those final steps
past all you know
and far into the unknown.
The last breath of reality.

The story of a song bird,
a kiss from your first love,
the memory of childhood
and the last chance of hope.

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  • glenn shannon silver member
    October 7
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    very beautiful piece indeed soft and lovely