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Tinge Of Autumn

Shimmering light as seasons change,
pass through the start of the new day.
Creativity swirls, thoughts rearrange,
welcome nature's allure on display.

Delve deep my lady of autumn touch,
cast upon me pallet of colors intense.
Teach me to express words and such,
fill and satisfy each and every sense.

Persimmon amongst crimson and taupe,
uncover the flesh of the mighty oak tree.
My bared soul thrives onward with hope,
through the pane let sun shine on me.
.
Preamble of winter, winds from north,
spiral inward within visions surreal.
Tinge of ancient autumn brought forth.
contemplate September's beauty, feel.

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Contest Prompt...
It's autumn, the season's colors being shades of beige, yellow, orange, brown, black, red, spice, and golden; putting poets in an especially inspirational mood.
This contest has a twist: Metaphorically speaking, what does this image say to you? The ancient sages have a meaning and a purpose in our lives. What is it?

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    November 3

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    I Love It!!

    This is a very stunning poem, for once I am speechless. All I can say is "thank you" for sharing your brilliant pen, and I'm wishing you all the best!!
    & s,
    Cyn


  • Beret55 silver member
    October 12
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    That my friend is a great write. Very good.


    • Sandygram
      October 12
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      I am glad you enjoyed this poem. Autumn is my favorite time of the year. Thank you for reading. Hugs and Smiles, Sandy

  • SoulWhispher
    October 9

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    I found this most moving, a wonderful description of the change of seasons, you never cease to amaze, love and blessings John

    • Sandygram
      October 12
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      Thank You John

      A pleasure to get on and read your comments. Brings a BIG smile. You take care. Hugs and Smiles.

      Peace and Grace
      Love, Sandy


  • faderman1959
    October 8

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    This was awsome! You capture the feelings perfectly my friend! Oh what a pleasure to read and feel!

    • Sandygram
      October 12
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      Good Morning Rob

      Hello my friend. So nice to hear from you. I appreciate you stopping by and leaving this nice comment. Hugs and Smiles to you.

      Always, Sandy


  • hawkeslake gold member
    October 8
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    Lovely and lyrical, nice flow and rhyme. I enjoyed the movement from one level of creativity to another yet to come. Lita

  • mcheadle
    October 7

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    Summer is gon as it goes

    How it affect ones heart and soul. The friefing of all gone by, what is yet to come will be done...mac

    • Sandygram
      October 12
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      Good Good Morning Mac

      I hope all is well. and you had a great weekend. I was busy so wasn't on much. Thank you for always remembering me and stopping by. . It always brings a smile,. Hugs and Smiles and prayers for you.

      Peace and Grace, Sandy

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