My love for you is:
Fresh brewed coffee in the morning.
Crawling into a warm bed on a cold winter night.
Uncontrollable laughter with just a look.
Being on the inside of a joke.
Taking a corner too fast in a Mustang.
Tranquility of a quiet house.
Dancing till the end of love.
My need for you is:
A cigarette to go with the coffee.
The blanket that warms the bed.
A voice to express laughter.
The muse for a joke.
Money to buy a Mustang.
The sanity from tranquility of a quiet house.
The rhythm in a melody.
Love is big and grand but it is,
Nothing!
Without the little things.
Words that need not be spoken.
Effortlessness as passing of time.
Security of a loving embrace.
Honesty as stark as a tree in winter.
Trust as pure as the sky is blue.
Patience of a saint.
These are just samplings of our love.
I cannot thank you enough for them.
Author notes
For my Fiancé.
A contest entry
- LOVE... by second-born.
900 points, ended October 13, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I am looking for a family! by Sheilasbabygal4life.
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Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - You Are My Friend; Someone Special by Heavenly Angel.
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Comments
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What a sweet and loving piece
I so enjoyed reading this!
Thank you for sharing and good luck to you! -
This was a very beautifully written piece too your fiance. Send me a message with your name and what you want too be on my family and I will add you to my favorites and too my page! Thanks for entering and best of luck too you in the contest.
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such a lovely and sincere piece for your fiance...liked how you compare your love with coffee...thank for sharing this fantastic work!!!
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