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Punishment .... (18 +)

Warning......... If you are not into BDSM... DO NOT
READ THIS POEM.. If you do not want to read anything
about Forced Homosexuality, DO NOT READ THIS.

And with that said and done... on with my poem....
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The Master is away, now some slaves do play,
and one of their games is "Do you Dare".
This game has one member, wear the Mistress' skirt,
and they must have it off before the Master comes home.

Now, today a newbie was the one in the skirt,
no one told him all the rules in the game.
he was caught wearing the skirt by the Mistress and Master
when they both came home early from work.

"Punishment will fit the crime." was all that They said.
"At tonight's gathering, you will have your punishment."
None of the other slaves would lift their eyes,
for only one other time was that punishment carried out.

When all the other Masters and Mistresses came over,
with their pets and slaves on leashes and nude.
That is when the one slave wished he never signed the contract
giving this couple control for five years.

In the middle of the room, stood a round table.
On it was a wheel, that could spin for a long time.
The slave was dressed in the skirt that he was caught in,
and then he was tied to the wheel on his knees.

"slaves and pets around the table you go."
That is the words he heard just before a blindfold
was placed over his eyes blocking his sight.
he was glad to have seen both male and females there.

"For being found in your Mistress' clothing,
tonight you will be use by your fellow slaves and pets.
If the wheel stops in front of a female, she will
either kiss your lips or lick your cock."

"But, if it lands in front of a male slave,
he will take you in the ass, hard;
or he will use your mouth as a pussy.
Do you understand and accept this punishment?"

The slave only nodded his head as he had seen
more females move forward than the males.
Once he agreed, the females all were removed
and the circle was made up of only males.

This was the punishment part of the wheel,
for only the same gender could be around it.
It was spun throughout the night,  and he
was taken by all around the table.

Each hard cock, fucked his ass
with a force that only a storm would survive.
his face was full of cum all night long
and not once did he open his mouth to complain.

When his Master thought he had enough,
from the wheel he was removed.
Never again did he play the game of "Do you Dare"
and yet he remain a slave for onto twenty years.

 

 

 

 

Author notes

There are 48 lines, not counting my warning at the top.

Riftkin.........Forced Homosexuality

"Homosexuality refers to romantic or sexual attraction
or behavior among members of the same sex,
situationally or as an enduring disposition."

As told by Wikipedia
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Homosexuality

Now your rules for this round are....please play close attention

1. REMEMBER, no pics and plain backgrounds
2. BDSM, B/D, S/M writes are allowed
3. Hardcore or sensual...up to you
4. Line limit.............no less than 30 lines, no more than 75
5. Please label appropriately Erotic/adult....etc
6. SPELL CHECK PLEASE

A contest entry

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Comments

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  • Corvus Corone
    October 28

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    This is always a hard topic to write, whether one is into BDSM or not. I am into BDSM but forced homosexuality is well and truly one of my hard limits, however I did enjoy your write and think you handled the topic well. Your story development flowed well and whilst you could have made more of the slave's feelings as to what was happening to him during the punishment you story is told well with very little word wastage. A couple of minor verb tense errors in line 32 and 54 is the only fault I can find.

    I am also impressed with the fact you included a warning. Excellent touch.

    Well done

    Score 88/100

    Corvus Corone


  • shimmer
    October 24

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    I saw the warning about the BDSM and it caught my eye, saw the punishment wheel and what the punishment was, well I held my breath. Shame on me I guess for really getting into that part. I do wish there was a bit more detail on the punishment but I realize there was a line limit and a story wasn't asked for but I do think this could make a wonderful story.

    spelling/grammar=20
    how well you handled the challenge=20
    grab me=20
    presentation/creativity=20
    overall=20

    total=100


  • Master Ktulu silver member
    October 24

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    I believe you had the right idea with this story. I like the whole BDSM aspect and punishment idea. However, I think that there could have been a little more detail as far as what was done to the slave.

    spelling/grammar/punctuation- 20

    Excellent! Perfect!


    presentation/creativity-18

    This is presented well, I think it would have been better with a little more imagery and details.

    how well you handled the challenge-20

    I think you really did great with your challenge.

    "grab me" effect -20

    I enjoyed this.



    overall-18

    Overall, this is a great story. The only thing that really stood out for me, is the lack of details..Though it was well told and presented well.

    Great job!

    _____________________________________
    Total- 96


    **Master Ktulu**

  • refinnej
    October 22

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    wow very creative use of the prompt. Reminds me of a book i am reading. Take care, best of luck in this challenge!!!


  • spiritraven
    October 22

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    Wow

    What a read from beginning to end. Good luck in the contest

  • mcfreeman
    October 16

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    Take your turn....

    dizzy as the wheel turns.....humbled and humiliated...you burn.


  • liltulip gold member
    October 16

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    nicely done!

    this definitely is a nice piece for forced homosexuality! good luck in the contest!


  • whitecoffee
    October 13
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    bravo


  • Bosiarbooger gold member
    October 11

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    HONEY!

    I'm not wearing a skirt at least not in front of others. Well done on a very tough challenge. Best of luck to you my dear, Love Rick


    • Riftkin gold member
      October 11
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      Honey, what we do in our room, will be for our eyes only. That I promise you here and now. No one will ever hear about it from my lips, or from my fingers typing it.

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