A kiss from you, silhouettes
Memories of you
Love I will never forget
Author notes
Written April 9th, 2004
A contest entry
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300 points, ended April 15, 2004, 46 entries
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mysterious
The word Silhouettes is powerful to this haiku
Very strong write.
S
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Fuckin' a dude. I dfon't knwo why you always try to find somehting wrong with the truth dude. You fuckin' sob. You festering pimple anas bastard. Screw your fucked up version of reality. YOu fuckin tard. Pedro
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Very nice little poem. I like the image of kissing silhouttes. This is captured as if still in a dream.
Lovely~
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Coma te amo para siempre y un eternidad Tigre
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This is beautiful, seriosuly, and totally unexpected. It's simple, yet complex, which most good haiku are. Great Job, it's good to be back and reading my favorites.
Joshua
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This was a well written haiku. I loved the way it gave so much feeling, and it is so simple. Beautiful, absolutely beautiful.
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nice
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Good
nice, I like this. I like haikus, simple... and you've done well with this one. Keep on at it -
Beautiful m'dear. I don't know how you managed to capture so many feelings in so few words. Wish I had that talent
*big hug* 
you papi
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awww
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