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Passion

I have never sang in tunes
as you make me sing.
My sighs have never
been so soft or deep.
I smell you from across
the room and it takes my
breath away, all self control
is used when sitting
alone in a room with you.
I would rip the clothes
right off your back,
just to touch the warmth
of your naked skin.
I would place your hands around
my waist and pull you close
for my loving embrace.
I cannot kiss you long, deep,
soft, rough, light enough.
My head is in a spin,
when making love to you is my best sin.
Your touch is like the sun in spring,
to wake the earth
and start bight and new again.
I miss you so much
it hurts, all I can do is
touch myself in memory of our
passion.

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  • Ahhh passion. Nothing like it in this world, and the pain of knowing it and loosing is the worst. Great write


  • Master Ktulu silver member
    October 8

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    A very strong and devotional exlamation of love and beyond.

    I noticed a part that you may want to fix;

    I smell you from across
    the room and it take my


    take should be takes.

    **Master Ktulu**

  • The D O M
    October 7

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    Good golly Miss Molly!!!

    A totally delicious explanation of that all embracing love and lost we all want to feel, and by the way, it's quite close to how I feel about you

    The D O M