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The Daisy

"Daisy's remind me of you,
                When all the other flowers
                                are wilting away and dying...
                                                Daisy's are springing to life"

Words can make you fall in love...
                                forever changed.

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  • islekine gold member
    October 7

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    Nice upbeat take!

    Thanks for sharing your talent! Best wishes in the contest and always!
    Write on and on...

    and


  • abuyi
    October 7

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    Words can make you fall in love...
    forever changed. nice

    sweet write, best of luck in the contest


  • BluesMan gold member
    October 7

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    Awww this is a very sweet little poem. I really enjoyed reading this little gem.
    Great take on the prompt.
    Good luck in the contest.

    Bill