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Bon Anniversaire

There is the thousands of stars
That float round your head
In state of happiness
And silent relief

And a million wishes
Waiting for you
So close your eyes
And hold on tight

To the wonders and virtues
That anticipate in another dream
But it’s not so far away
Just close your eyes

And whatever you see
With whatever you believe
Will be filled with rainbows
And dancing unicorns

Have a great day
And I wish you like
But what I’m trying to say
is…

Bon anniversaire

Well what I’m trying to say is
I hope that another year older
Doesn’t always make you
Another year wiser

But keep your head up
And watch your back
Pull on the hat
And scream HAPPY BIRTHDAY

Author notes

Happy Birthday Aaron

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  • Darkdreamer333
    October 25
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    beautiful!!! i love it.good choice of words, very vivid


  • dukeshorts
    October 12
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    i really loved this poem

  • aw, this is beautiful and a lovely way to say something!!!!


  • HerexIxDie
    October 9
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    is awesome
    really great writing, i love it. keep it up

  • Happy Birthday and hope you have fun
    A really great write and i love it. Keep
    scribbling and good job!


  • Syko Path
    October 8
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    HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! (whoever yu are...)

  • very very good ,
    Aaron must be very happy!


  • glitterydoom
    October 7
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    aw
    <3

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