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Immaculate

Raven hair,
with tints of gold;
for hours I could stare--
but there's no words to be told...

...no, words aren't enough,
nor a picture worth a thousand words;
not even the word love is enough,
for my love is beyond words.

Amber eyes
and porcelain soft to the touch;
I don't mind being the victim to this demise;
loving you is never too much.

As selfish as it may be
the rest of my life with you is not enough,
nor a forever spent with me.
My wish to be with you beyond eternity is no bluff.

Perfection beyond it's finest;
yes, that's what I think you are.
You're a clarity more beautiful than the most precious diamonds,
and my love for you burns brighter than the most fiery star.

These words may seem so cliche,
but I mean them to the fullest extent.
I can't help but feel this way.
In my eyes, you're immaculate.

I love you.


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  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    October 7

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    Awwh I loved this. It was so beautiful and reminds me of how I feel about my girlfriend. I love her so much and want to be with her forever, or longer if possible.



    -Steve-