Your words can scar
they tear at my heart
they push me far
making us drift apart.
Your words can mutilate
the fibers of my soul
you try to imitate
try making me whole.
Your words run deep
hurting me real bad
enabling me to sleep
and making me sad.
Your words are enough
to ruin a good thing
try to make me tough
but they just sting.
plz tell me what you think...in a nice way
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this is really good.
Your words are enough
to ruin a good thing
try to make me tough
but they just sting
I love these lines
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There is life and death in the power of the tongue, so speaking to one another with uplifting thoughts can help the spirits heal. I send my love daughter dear, and hope you know you are cherished here, much love, always.
poeticweaver~
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wow incredable
this is amazing and sad i loved it
and i love you
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Really like your poem. It was really good. Love and Peace my dear friend.
-Jess
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Oh I loved it , It is such the trueth though words can hurt more thab what people think the do Searra
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Great!
The fibers of my soul is my favorite line. It's touching in a subtle way.
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Niice. Good poem.
~Kiwi
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wow great job i know how you feel
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wow this is so true
!!! i love it!!!
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