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Land of Dreams

Golden meadows bloom
With a velvet sky of fluff
Please let the water sing to me
Of days of sorrow
and days of joy
Your lilies float
Like angels in your sky
and roses wade in your ripple
Oh sky of velvet
Oh meadow of gold
Please take me to the land
Which I dream of

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Just for this contest.
I havn't written a poem in awhile, feels good. Hope you enjoy. Please critque.

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