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Papa's Hold

it may seem selfish
it may seem rude
but my heart is full
and for now has no room for two

Papa has eased my burdens
lightened my load
given me strength to begin
a journey that only he knows

it may seem strange
it may seem weak
but he has given me light
and blind eyes to see

faith brings me hope
and peace beyond dreams
it over flows through words
and conquers all needs

it may seem distant
it may seem cold
but my love is his
and presently his alone

hope brings my joy
in boxes filled with wanted ads
through his word I am worthy
and self-destruction ends

so it may seem selfish
you may not understand
but Papa holds my heart
in the strength of his hands

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  • smitaanand
    October 10

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    What a lovely write honest vibrant truthful innocent with a streak of stubborn loveof achild for her father well expressed. Exactly the way I felt about dad tillI met and married my husband. You have gifted me deja vu what delight I feel that can never be expressed in simple words.Glad you shared and keep penning this is amazing...


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 8

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    for Papa is the man that walked Galilee and saved our wretched souls sinners such as me.. love the way he speaks to us in verse. and if we sit still and listen.. we will hear in words in heart.. well penned hun always Hugs Angel♥


  • awannabepoet
    October 7

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    God loves you child, if he finds a little room in your heart you are a guarenteed winner!

    Yeah, keep singing the praises and making him the center of your life until the day you can make room for a mortal man that deserves it of course.

    Be well my child, Papa loves you and the rest of us too.





  • GothicFyre
    October 7

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    Awwwwww, I felt this for my biological dad. Unfortunately he's dead, so he cannot share my burdens, but he made me strong enough to survive. Epic poem!


    • C J Weatherholt
      October 7
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      Thanks so much for reading "Papa" is actually what I call God so I understand how you may not feel like your Dad is beside you but truly he is.

      May God Bless You!

      ~CJ~

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