If we make God mad it will be sad.
Things will change and really get bad.
The stars will fall from the sky;
the trees and flowers will start to cry.
The mountains will all fall down;
water will cover the whole ground;
the clouds will crease to exist;
the air will dry up to a fuzzy mist
His anger is slow but when it
gets hot, his vengeance falls down
and its hard to stop. justice and peace
is what he seeks. Made for the
powerful and destroys the weak
Fire will break out everywhere;
the surface of earth laid to waste.
You and the family of man will be gone-
simply because of knowing right
and doing wrong
The earth itself will then explode,
blowing away every soul.
When all is said and done,
the universe will be left without
you or anyone.
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A very descriptive and powerful message. Very well done. God bless.
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This was very interesting. I didn't like the way you rythmed you verses, it seemed very...regressed. However, I did like the second stanza. I think your opinion on God is an odd one. We were made to love God, not to fear him.
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It seems God has His laws in order
as every cause has an effect.
I believe prayer is needed
an intervention, as we are so governed by our nature.
this is quite a deep look int o God's Divine order
Beatifully written
God bless you my friend..
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my my temper temper
i can imagine a child praying, believing this, and i wonder ...
can fear fill the void?
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