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Prom Night

A mysterious girl has been standing alone,
Waiting in an elegant dress- ready
For prom.
He beloved crush passes
With his girlfriend.
Crush leaves his date so he can go check in.
The mystery girl grabs the girlfriend and pulls her
Into the woods, where no screams can be heard.
She need to make it fast.
The mystery girl has girlfriend by the neck.
"Don't try to scream, it will only make it worse... for you anyhow"
The mystery girl needs to wait for the moonlight to be directly upon her.
Today, is her birthday...
The day she is allowed to devour.
The moonlight shines bright upon them.
It's time!
Her teeth elongate into ivory nails, her skin turns pale,
And her blood freezes.
Her sense become acute, as her long brown hair
Blows wildly around her face.
While holding the girlfriend, she transforms.
The mystery girl throws the girlfriend to the woodland floor...
Hard.
A snap is heard within the girlfriend's leg.
The mystery girl jumps on the girl and whispers,
"I'll take excellent care of him, I do love him- more than you ever did!"
The girlfriend takes in a breath to scream,
But is interrupted by the mouth around her throat...
The mouth that is devouring the soul.
When the soul is completely gone,
The mystery girl changes into the girlfriends dress and
Runs back to the spot where she stole the previous girlfriend.
She takes out a mirror,
"Perfect."
She is the girlfriend.
She wipes the blood from her mouth as her
Newly aquired boyfriend walked up.
Prom night was just how she needed it...
A quick fix of soul and a new lover.

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  • tat2qt4u
    November 18
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    haha that was good taylor wicked awsome
    -tati

  • LordZeya
    October 18

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    Whoa, you've been having some dark thoughts these days... It's got a huge feeling of jealousy imbibed in it, and makes me think of vampires... sort of creepy. Wow, thats quite a bit better than some of your other works!


  • love-life-peace
    October 10
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    OMG.. That was AWESOME!

    I could TOTALLY picture it! It was so so cool!


  • Celtic Legend
    October 9
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    Wow that's scawy! I thought it was going to be like the movie but holy cow that's cool!


  • lesbian-in-love
    October 8

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    This was really interesting and very dark. This was well written. I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest. Also keep up the amazing work!

  • It was very detailed and I loved every word. This is an awesome poem!

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