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Bloody Words

Huge letters of incoherent
Writing on the wall,
Bloody, messy and looming,
Bold, it watches his every move,
Her every word.

Dripping on the floor,
Seeping into their hearts,
But alas,
It does not match,
They are rejected
And with loss they must live,
With a gaping hole in their otherwise crystal world
And with no anaesthesia to help ease the pain

Constructive criticism very much appreciated

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