I love you...
Don't you love me back?
You don't show it!
Your friends talk about you loving me,
But why can't you say it?
I would give anything for you to show
Signs of how you love me.
Tonight...
Tonight you will read this letter,
And realize I am gone forever.
You were the only one for me,
The light at the end of the tunnel.
Couldn't you have given me a slight clue...
I've gave clues, I told you,
How much I loved you.
Now I am gone,
My blood is all over the floor
With the note that I left you.
I hope someday we will meet again-
Because it's true...
I will never stop loving you.
Oh, dear love-
I hope soon you will realize what your
Love can do to a girl.
Maybe then, when you realize it,
You can tell me you love me.
I'm looking down upon my lifeless body,
Why are you kissing me now?
I'm DEAD...
And know you are too.
Our blood mixes together.
As I watch with interest-
Your voice catches my ear...
I turn, and hear the 3 words I had always
Longed to hear.
I love you too!
A contest entry
- LOOKING FOR WRITES ON LOST LOVE by kaylalala.
400 points, ended October 27, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This poem
this poem was actually quite good. i loved it. i liked the way that you made the point of an old saying: do i have to kill myself to get you to say i love you? or whatever that thing was. lol anywayzz it was really good
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it was kinda confuzing at first, then i read more and under stood it. its really good
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this was an amazingly awesome poem i loved it...it was written very well and i liked the flow great job, and good luck this should win for sure
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awe
that is the sweetest thing i love it your in
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