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turn left.

t-t-t-turn left at the next junction or you'll get hurt

i can't tell you more 'cause it's really what you deserve

it'll be clean cut, sharp fast, without any pain

and in two years there'll still be flowers on the road

on Starkberry lane.

with a pretty card from your two year old little child

who you never met but always wanted to see smile

and the best part is, you'll never get to see her

and frankly she really wasn't very eager to

go meet you.

this is your fault; you definitely chose your own fate

but my mind's telling me to call them before it's too late

i told them to hurt you but now I start to regret

all the times I denied my daughter the truth

and tried to forget.

daddy didn't want her did he? he didn't really desire

to see his darling daughter, if even just for a little while.

and God I can't imagine why because her lovely

cheeky smile lights up my day and pauses the silent

yet deafening loneliness.

God, please turn left.

Damn it.

For her sake.

Author notes

Er lol bit of a weird topic. If you didn't understand what it was about (which is very probable), then basically this poem is in the POV of a single mother. The father ran off to the other end of the country and always said he wanted to see the kid but he never ever did. He leaves them hanging again because he didn't come when he said he would so she hires people to crash a car into his, effectively killing him, but she has last minute regrets.

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  • SpydurPoet gold member
    October 7
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    powerful. this was amazing. the story lit a whole movie of pictures in my head. excellent job.
    write on.
    ~*~SP~*~

  • regret seems to part of this, and truly i under stand it. i love it. youre great.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    October 7

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    oh wow...this is really good. like very powerful and deep. i love the font, what is it? lol. keep writing!
    Stephanie ♥


    • Cyanide Loved
      October 8
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      Thank you! I think the font is ummmmm the fourth one down xD I'm lazy sorry ... x

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