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I hear a sound

The blanket starts to jiggle

I found the source

A tiny little giggle

Stop that cackle

Come back to my side

I see you in there

You can’t hide


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  • Aalta silver member
    October 9
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    hey that's such a sweet poem.... full of emotions and purely from heart

    keep writing


  • LovesBestGlasses
    October 8
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    such a sweet lil poem! <3 it


  • marandah gold member
    October 7

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    This would make athe perfect opening

    to a delightful children's book.

    Sweet, sweet poem. I loved the flow of the first four lines, and I absolutely adore 'jiggle' and 'giggle'

    Well done


    • Vanessa Wolfe
      October 8
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      Great Idea!!

      i think i'll start working on that. and try posting it on here.


  • solitaire
    October 7
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    charming

    Your words create a beautiful image. Nice work.

    solitaire

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