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Her seeds, sown in Me.

I have her seeds sown in me,

And every fruit, every flower,
Every leaf, every stem, that grows,

I literally mean every word-
That grows from me

Has a hellish taste of her.

Don’t know how deep those seeds are

I dig me, plough me,
Bake me in sun, I beat me, I get upside-down

I literally look in every vein-
Every vein I have

She didn’t leave any imprints.

Yet I have her seeds… nourishing.

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  • Morbid DreaMz
    October 7

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    Very unique.
    Well written.
    Definitely held my attention.
    Funny how some people are within, and no matter how you try to find them to get them out, they never seem to go... And only grow...
    Good luck in the contest. And thank you for entering. =D