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The storm

While your mind is clouded the tears I cry fall down like the rains of a storm.

That face you saw so many months ago was the calm before the rage.

So many months filled with that rage my come back to haunt you.

But in light the is darkness hiding waiting for a chance to spread.

Always evil in good noone is perfect

so uncloud your mind and try to calm my raging storm

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This is just something that came into my mind so it has no style

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  • Fallen-Thumper
    October 8

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    there is some really great imagery here and thew first line just drew me in.
    it has a style but i cant remember what it is called.
    welcome to AP
    and a really amazing piece. Great job!
    -penguin-