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Perfect In No Way

I kissed Boys
I Smoked Weed
I Snuck out that night
I got drunk
I'm Not Perfect , You don't have to Repeat yourself

I've had councillors, i blew em off
I have Regrets
I Attempted suicide
i Cut Myself
Yea i Know I'm not Perfect

I have Black Hair
I Have Peircings
I Have Scars
I have Memories
Yea I Know, With My Past I Can't Possibly Be Perfect

I Have Cheated
I Had Eating Disorder
I Cryed Myself To Sleep
i was Abused
Can You See Why I'm Not Perfect Now
I Wonder Streets
Police Know Me
I'm Well Known In My Town
And, Yes I Was At That Party
So Dont Ever Say Your Perfect The Way You Are

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  • SimplySonnets gold member
    October 11

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    Liked your heart felt poem a lot, don't touch a thing its perfect the way it is. liked the way you list your faults, then just chuck in as a byline using the small i. line 9, 19, very poignant. you write from the heart with talent, allow it to mature, well done.