Sweet aroma; your skin
Your breath upon my chin
I offer my resolve
to drink you in
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L__I
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Quote Prompt from Image
Image - cardboardlove.com
A contest entry
- LOVE... by second-born.
900 points, ended October 13, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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such a "finely" made piece...short, sweet and sincere...thanks for sharing your work!!!
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, this i like. very creative and wonderful pic.
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I love short poems, so much can be expressed with so little, very well done! Always glad I come to check on what you've recently wrote. Keep up the good work, and best of luck in the contest!
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I shall look at a cup of coffee in an entirely new light from now on ..
good luck with the contest
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lol, pattiboo, i've changed the last couple of lines
the old ones (I offer you my lips, to savour you) seemed a bit suggestive, even though they were penned with honorable intention.
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niniBABY(:
Hey my New Zealand friend
ty for your commenting on my poem
it really helped me heaps x)
I enjoyed reading this piece, plain
and simple but tells a magnificent story.
LOVED IT!
your friend
Nini x
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