Whispered secrets
binding within a name
the damning consequences
of my so-called 'sins'
breathe soundlessly
I need sanity in comfort
if I am to be redeemed
illicit love
carries its own death within it
broken ocean of imaginary
revealed in a single instant
every level of devotion
Wipe the recollection
so I can forget
the divine immanent within me
transcending the realization
that my way of love culminates
...release me…
to the freedom of being
whispered about in lost prayers
brush aside the webs
of unconscious compulsion
that begets me
in wanting more
Please tell me what you think
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A very powerful poem--as is compulsion. Heart wrenching. Well written . If based in truth, wishing you the best in finding the light within (the core of divinity)--actually SELF Love. No intention to lecture---only best wishes!
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Wow that is very cool
Great imagenary write
I can piture the words you write just too good
Really like it and can relate to it
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May you find ...
the key to all happiness: to go back to the Core of divinity.
Thank you for a beautiful poem.
Love
Myra
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Hello
Very deep words in this poem. You have true talent.
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Amazing...
wow........Dragonfly said I'd love your work, and he was right. Amazing, astounding, breathtaking, caused me to be speechless. I am definitely adding you to my favorites so that I can see any new ones you have up.
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wow, i'm speechless... i love the picture you chose, i love the raw emotion in this write. Bravo sis. wow, you did a very nice job on this! You defintely know how to capture the essence of pain and suffering in ones mind.
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mm maybe i am wrong..i usually am...but i think in this wonderful poem i read a sub narrative of buddhist thought and zen in particular..what is that saying..yes..zen spirituality is not thinking about god while you peel potatoes, zen spiritaluality is simply to peel the potatoes...wonderful...well done
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This is deep, powerful, compelling and spellbinding!!! I love it, every word. I think you have truly found your voice. This speaks to me of the nature of knowing what you want but not knowing how to get it, where to get it, or even if it exists. Yet, we dream and we dream of what may be...
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This is truly a wonderful read Sis! You have a fantastic gift for painting emotional layers that holds the reader's attention. Bravo!
Love,
Amera♥
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an excellent expression you share in this poem. so many touch points as i read your lines. i am in awe at the nature of what you have captured so well here. this may be my favorite of yours i've read so far.
wonderful work.
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An amazing write. I found myself lost in it, carrying on every word. You are a talented writer. Awesome!
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Mysteriously provocative, with a darkness
that invites intrigue. the picture you use
is as fragmented as these intense words.
They speak with a depth of longing and
subtle melancholy. Nicely done my friend
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This is a very appropriate piece of work. Beautifully composed. I would love to see you rhyme.
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Sis, What a read this one is! Wow!! I love this! This is probably the deepest write I have seen from you in a very long time. I am not sure I have words for this one! Wow!!!!!
and love
Nyetta
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Deeply put!
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This is strewn with beautiful imagery that touches the soul and captures the immagination.This was really a delectable treat to the senses.Thanks for sharing this one.Take care and keep writing
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Brilliant
Definitely a poem that leaves an impression of imagery on one's mind ... well done! -
Stunning!!
As usual another spellbinding from you Goddess. Such wonderful imagery creating beautiful pictures within ones mind while at the same time tugging at our hearts. An absolutely stunning piece of writing giving a glimpse into a beautiful soul. I bow to your amazing talent.
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