you are the echo
always
in the wind
of my silence.
Author notes
October 6, 2009
A contest entry
- Being Brautigan's Brain Again by Odds and Ends.
1100 points, ended November 9, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Is this poem weak? Honestly.
Comments
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Congratulations on your HM.
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Congratulations, piggyback. Well done, Poet. 
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this was a judge's favorite out of all five of us. We thought that you were one of the few entries that captured Brautigan's almost "zen" side.
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wow, thank you!
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Powerful image and thoughts in so few words.
I really enjoyed the read and have a strong feeling the words will stay with me.
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heads up...
This one echoes.
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This poem is ...
filled with so few words yet create a tornado in the mind ... the title is so appropriate for these few words. joy
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very nice indeed
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thanks!
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this is beautiful.
honestly.
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thank you
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