As your smile cracked like the frozen lakes below,
blanketed from a golden day
Each look became a skate slice over my exterior heart,
the true one still protected by this wall
I stumbled many miles towards the danger of your questioned mind,
hoping the answer inside, matched your lips
My fingernails try to scrape the selfish pride away from yours,
but only nailpolish falls
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Prompt: http://allpoetry.com/poem/5771631
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A contest entry
- quickieeeeeeeeee! ♥ kate by Kathraina.
525 points, ended October 8, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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your poems are brilliant, the third stanza was my favorite. keep writing, i cant wait until you finish your other poems so i can read them. hurry up! jk, take your time, i can wait.
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wow martellis thankyou soo much for your sweet words it means alot to me!!!
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nice imagry very nice. loves it. glad you got he gold you deserve it.
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Absolutely gorgeous use of words and imagination,thanks for sharing.A well deserved gold you interpretation is unique.Please read my version...
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Wow! I am completely stunned by your words.
brilliant job with this write
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