I kissed the breath of your bad karma
and it left me contagious -- on the life
support of a photograph
but it doesn't speak without the darkness
holding the veins of my heart hostage.
sadly.
Author notes
Prompt:
"i can be
alone by myself
i was
lonely alone
now i'm lonely
with you
something is wrong
there are flies
everywhere
i go"
- poem 'alone' by Nikki Giovanni
35 words
A contest entry
- Quickie ---- by Naridill.
400 points, ended October 7, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Better than the porno bush idea I had.
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oh the last words made my heart pang, it was a brilliant ending. Amazing write
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lol Im glad you liked the ending I thought it fit but the judge didnt like it
Well kind of liked it lol. Thank ya for the comment
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Ewwwwwww Bad Karma breath, thats worse than halitosis!!!
Very nicely done for the prompt, why you guys gotta go all dark and shit. Good job and best of luck... Scott 
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Last word killed it for me, apart from that - this was stellar!
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ohhh nice!
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Hehe I was jussstt commenting on yours
Nice to see you, contest ninja
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