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L.O.V.E.

Didn't really think,
It was just like magic,
It was all perfectly planned.

Your kiss just warm and touching,
The feel of your skin brushing mine,
Makes my heart flutter.

Never knowing I'd find you,
Never knew you'd be the one,
Till you fell from the stars,
And into my life.

As time passes,
Your still on my mind,
Your still the only one for me.

Slowly I find out,
What you planned for me,
That you loved me too,
That you wanted to marry me...

Author notes

Are you ever too old to really fall in love?
No. Never.
And are you ever too old to feel like a teenager in love?
No! NO! NO! ^w^

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  • Riftkin gold member
    October 12

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    This holds a tenderness to it, and it is something wonderful to feel.
    Best of luck to you with this.

    Riftkin


  • PurpleSky
    October 7

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    very short and sweet also right to the point. the ending was lovely. thanks for taking the time to enter and good luck in the contest.
    huggles
    Lena