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Amen

"Embark upon me Lord
these images that take flight  in my dreams
visions of that first cry
that first tear
like sunshine escalates upon my shoulders
and heavenly stardust is magically thrown
Please tell my wife and daughter
I'm finally comming home"
AMEN

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  • JinSays gold member
    October 10
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    AMEN.
    this is so very lovely, heartfelt-honest. thank you.
    love,
    jin