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Reminsce Forgotten.




Shadowed imprints
silence the focus on
misdemeanors and
trust issues.

Coloured empathy
smiled with a
fragance of
reminscent characters.

And you never could realize
I retracted from early memories
and learned how to love.





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8 poets
30 minutes
50 words max

word count ~ 32 words

prompt: Quote;
"Never think about the mistakes you made. Think about the mistakes you will make."
-unknown.

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Comments

  • wow josheh i dont understand a word of this n i still kno it's a great poem! lol

  • WOW!!!! This is short and sweet and beautiful beyond words... Your words and emotion in this is brilliant...

    I appplaud you, dear poet...

    Keep on penning..


  • ladybug.
    October 7

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    See, this is why I do quickies for you, love.
    You never fail to absolutely amaze me with your words.


  • Mango Memories gold member
    October 6

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    Nice take on the prompt