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Born For You

The phone rings in the middle of the night.
I somehow know it's you on the other line.
As you speak, you shake with heartache.
You tell me things are far from fine...

Another one has slipped through the cracks.
Though he promised he wouldn't leave.
I'm left to hold what is left.
For I can't breathe; when you're not happy.

{Chorus}
But I want you to know...
I'm ready for sleepless nights.
My sheild is cleaned; and guns are loaded.
So you rest, and let me handle the fights.
Pass over the weight on your chest.
& slowly take in your first breath.
I want you to know...
Unlike the rest, I'll never go.

Little does every man know;
You're an angel who lost her way.
Heaven sent, and given a true heart.
No matter what they say.

I'm not the one you dream of.
Though I was born only for you.
You search for something more in the shadows.
No matter what I try to do.

{Chorus}
But I want you to know...
I'm ready for sleepless nights.
My sheild is cleaned; and guns are loaded.
So you rest, and let me handle the fights.
Pass over the weight on your chest.
& slowly take in your first breath.
I want you to know...
Unlike the rest, I'll never go.

I want you to know, I'll always pull through.
Unlike the rest, I was born for you.

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Lord, I havn't written this bad since...never? Bare with me, it'll get more rocky.

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  • Evinde
    October 17

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    Incredibly sweet, well thought, and I don't think it's bad at all. I love it and whoever this is directed at is a lucky lucky person!


    • CharleeBoy
      October 17
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      Not directed to anyone, I have been writing for a while...so I know how to write about emotions that aren't my own. Thanks though.


      • Evinde
        October 18
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        oh ym goodness, i do that too! Other people's emotions affect me prett badly, for example i once wrote a poemn about someone else's breakup/sadness. It's wierd haha

  • I'm completely in love with the idea of being born for someone!!! That's such a beautiful thought. I don't know if the idea has made me like your poem more or if I like it for it's other merits just as much as well. Cool write though, really.


  • Kathraina gold member
    October 6

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    Why do you think this is bad???????
    I totally love the message here

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