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When I am Gone

When I am gone I don't want you to cry,
I will still be close but not so close,
that you can reach out and grab me,
touch me, see me, or reach me.

When I am gone you will get no word,
no warning,
no nothing,
just a shadow.

When I am gone you will see,
see the way you've treated me,
and you will suffer,
but I will not help.

When I am gone you will not know,
the reason I left or where I am going,
where I will end up,
or how I will get there.

When I am gone you will know,
what pain I felt all along,
to be one on the receiving end,
instead of the giving end as always.

When I am gone you will know. . .nothing.

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I smile not because i must but because i am different and know it.

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  • Ash-
    October 24, 2009

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    what is wrong why are you always sad? u have a great boyfriend a family money, food a house you musent forget what u have and who


    • Psychoticemochick
      November 18, 2009
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      also this is just me. this is the way i am. i write dark stuff. it's just me. it doesn't mean i am not happy. it doesn't mean i don't like what i have. it's just. . .me.

    • Psychoticemochick
      November 18, 2009
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      i am not sad. i am actually happy.

  • The Poetic Dragon
    October 6, 2009

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    The funny thing about a person's perceptions of a world without them is that they will never be around after they die to witness if their prophecies actualized. ©KEEP THE INK FLOWING

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