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split

my heart is being split
and although i hate to admit
i can't let myself resign
even though i know  i' can't make you mine

my brain is screaming "you dirty s.l.u.t!"
with my hidden feelings i cant shut
they're so obvious
and you're so oblivious

when i see you i smile a stupid smile
wishing you'd smile back all the while
i know this will never be reality
but maybe it's just my poor rationality

either way
i know i can't stay
i must move on
you wont miss me when i'm gone

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  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    October 25

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    you write rhyme very well. I hope that getting this out on paper has been cathartic for you. I know how much better I feel when I let go through writing. Thanks for sharing.
    peace an dlight,
    Kendal


  • meggie94x
    October 7
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    im so confused by this lol but its really good

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