And you're gorgeous
with your voice
sending shivers
down my spine;
deliciously your laughter
tickles at the butterflies
infecting my stomach...
and you make my voice wobble.
You make my resolve waver,
you're the dreaded weakness
that I love to give into,
the sinful secret,
I can't give up.
The lust I need
and the love I feel;
you're the world
and you're sitting at my feet
but I'm scared,
you don't care;;
you'll always be there to hold me.
Be brutally honest [but nice..]!
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That was beautiful. The imagery is wonderful and expressed beautiful emotion as well. I especially liked the ending. it's great when you have someone around that even when you're unsure or scared about things, they're around to let you know everything will be okay. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.
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...you just got yourself a fan =]
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That was a sexi poem LOL
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I really really liked this! Every part felt really ambiguous to me, and i could relate it to someone of my own...well done
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Very Nice, I like it....
well hello there,you dont know me, but I like the way you write and maby you could help me out with some pointers and stuff, well good bye.
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this is such a wonderfully penned poem
every line of it was filled with imagery and brilliant descriptions that made me want to say "awww". the short lines work because they are filled with meaning.
"the sinful secret,
I can't give up."
the beginning to end made me smile great work!!
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Ha. I've been familiar with these "secrets" more than once. This
totally captures the feeling. I love it.
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I'm acquainted with these secrets, on many different levels; perhaps more with friendship than romantic love (I tend to think that this makes it all the worse). This is poignant and powerful, and resonates on a deep level with me.
Well written, love.
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Thank you so much
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not half as amazing as you
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<3
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