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The New Stress

The forces that be
never cease
to cloud the crystal ball
mysteries all
cowed within-
histories shawl
missing sisterly halls
kissing four walls
of a distant recall
reminiscing
of child memories crawl
like spiders down a withering
scrambling
scrawl
dithering
rambling call
when you need it but it gambles it all.

A backtrack of a black past
remembering flesh and image amassed
livid
from the scrimmage surpassed.

It tasted death
somehow based today
with a new breath
a debut
with a new step
pursue:
for the new test
pursuit:
for the new breast
amorousness
with a new stress.

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