There is a day
Which comes to us all
For we are
Born to die
Inevitibly 'tis
The bodies fate
Do we learn what
We need to know
Before it is too late?
Please tell me what you think
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very interesting poem. all things do come to an end eventually. short and to the point, but still philosophical
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Good question!
Short and succinct, but point well made. It's a good question we all need to ask ourselves. I think maybe a poet like you is most likely to succeed. I like your layout for this also. I liked the way you rymed it also. Thanks very much, and keep writing!
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Thank you for your thoughtful comment; compliment, and applause for I do appreciate them.
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Ah, an interesting poem. I liked reading this; I read the second stanza twice. Lovely. Definately bookmarked
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Thank you for your comment; compliment, and applause for I do appreciate them.
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Interesting. Touches on something we all think about but don't ponder on a lot, or enough. Wonderful poem.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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Thank you for your thoughtful comment; compliment, and comment, for I do appreciate them.
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