Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

"Please Die..."

“Please die.” I’d understand, if but
  I could imagine those tears
Welling inside my own eyes, shut:
  And they have fallen on Dead ears.

For Love should not be lightly cleft –
  Nor is it worth it, anymore:
You had me believing – you’d left.
  And thus - who is there to die for?

But look! Do we not know to Live?
  Yet more, an Angel I heard: 
Reminding me love’s born to give:
  But might I die, gets the last word.

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Minam
    November 19
    ?
    Edit | Reply
    whoa this is a wicked as piece mate! i like i like!


  • hamid
    October 26
    Edit | Reply
    like it!


  • evil sami
    October 7

    Edit | Reply
    that's so sad it's good it has a feeling of a love gone wrong