Everyone second someone is thinking.
Every two seconds someone laughs.
Every three seconds someone is in love.
Every four seconds someone cuts themselves.
Every five seconds someone is hurt.
Every six seconds someone is born.
Every seven seconds someone is divorced.
Every eight seconds someone dies.
Every nine seconds someone cries.
Every ten seconds someone is married.
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The list would go on for a little while longer, but you get the idea...
please tell me what you think
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Very touching...It's so true. I love it, this is very deep!
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Fascinating, contrasting all of these things together. My only suggestion is that the first line would read better "Every second someone..." I know it kinda breaks the flow of "one, two, three, four," But every "one" second just sounds awkward. Anyhow, I like this, good job!
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thank you =)
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I like it very true.Good job
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very good
i like this poem. its simple and the truth . i hope you continue to write.
clara snow .
p.s welcome to the group
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thank you very much =)
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