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With Beautiful Adoring

With beautiful adoring
morning love kisses the sky into being
as golden ambrosia melts
into dawn's eclipsing joy

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  • Puppydog gold member
    October 7

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    SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    As I read this I can close my eyes and picture a golden sunrise! Blue sky with white puffy clouds drifting lazily by!


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    October 6
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    this is beauty, and i do mean that this is beauty, keep it flowing


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    October 6
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    Oh very pretty write!
    I love the beauty in brevity!
    Thank you so much for sharing!
    The best of luck to you!!!