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Betrayal

I'm losing you
But I don't want to
Whats worse-
You don't seem to care

Best friends, four years
How can you just
Throw that all away?

You've known him, how long?
Two months?
And you've chosen
My silence over
His absence

What can I say?
I am insulted
Offended, hurt
Betrayed

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Ashleigh. Come back, please

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