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Poetic adventures

Eventually Poetry goes to our heads

Creating, ecstatic musing erections

Not easily been accommodated within

Ones self

Bemused fame, keeps vigil to approval

As it comes in small shots

Of sweet bullshiting

Injecting egopathia to an unwary poet

Hint...

I fell in love with your poetry

she says,

And then with you!

In dismay he falls in delirium

Nearly pisses himself

Me? Ohhhhhhhhhh.....

The King has fallen from his horse

Lost sword and shield to foe

Surendered his crown upon scattered margaritas

Torn, as if of paper

made it was.

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  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 22

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    Written from the soul of a Poet

     

    quite lovely

     

    God bless you my friend...


  • lovlilmystery
    October 15
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    Beautifully written piece and can see where it is going. Thanks for sharing. Take care and have a great day.

    Sandi


  • Jalalbad gold member
    October 8
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    Excellent piece

  • excellent

    Wow i simply loved this piece. the wording, the honesty...its humble some how.
    great work and thanks.


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 6

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    ah Angelo i love this witted write.. you mind is superb and the message well derived ...awesome hun as always hugs Angel♥

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