I just want to fit in.
Is that so wrong?
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(Ya it is.)
When I do that by making her life a living hell.
It’s not fair to her.
And I don’t think I’m better.
Not one bit.
(No she is.)
She is better then I can ever be
She is the one who does not fight back
Who takes it with out trying to hurt me.
That’s why I tear her down so I can be bigger
Is it worth it? I don’t want to be mean to her
But I do it to fit in
I want to feel cool
Alive
Like I belong
I don’t want to be a nerd
Twerp
Loser
(So that is what I call her.)
Every one else is doing it so it won’t hurt if one more dose.
It’s not like I have ever bin her friend.
But can I live with my self if I cause her death?
........No.........
(Then why can’t I stop? )
Author notes
hey this is a poem about what i think is going though some bullys heads.
my name is Neatsa and my prompt was the bully
A contest entry
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703 points, ended October 18, 15 entries
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Awesome.
This is really really good. im not even kidding. its very creative and well written. i love the first couple of lines. one word: Wow. -
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thanks so much im glad you like it
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very well done
I'll go line by line....
The beginning is perfect....
in the second verse I think it should be And I don’t think I’m better
have you intentionally spelt all the does 's as dose and else as ells
overall the poem is really good.... I like it very much... a very interesting take.
thanks for entering and all the best for the contest
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thank you so much for the comment no the spelling mastacks were an accident im sorry
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