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Motherless Son

Infuriating,
rain hammers on my hat-less scalp,
trickles down my neck,
on down my back.

I curse the  trespassing liquid,

without imagination, originality,

but bolstered  with tangled anger.

Emotions have to form a line today,

and like unruly children they push and shove.

 

 

How will he sleep tonight?

In the bed he found his dead mother in?

Who will hold him?

As his childhood withers,
after just seven winters.


Some of the rain is fake,

and trickles onto my lips,

tasting of salt.

 

Crying in the rain,

a trick all men learn.

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  • This is so pretty and sad.


  • Raining Kisses silver member
    October 7

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    BRAVO...BRAVO...BRAVO SOME MORE,,,THIS IS PUBLISH WORTHY BEYOND DOUBT...OMG I LOVE THIS
    THANKYOU
    T

  • Jon Supertramp
    October 7
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    "crying in the rain, a trick all men learn" that line is going to stay with me


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    October 6

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    Ummm. No. You cannot hang up your quill. This was brilliant! I loved the imagery in this, the emotion, it was amazing.
    Welcome to AP!!
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~