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Knockin' On Doors

Knock, knock, knockin' on heavens door
"Who goes there!" Booms a voice.
"It is I, Crazychook of Pie"
"What do you warrant, tell me, mere chicken!"
"I want an angel slave to bake me cakes."

Knock, knock, knockin' on hells door
"Who goes there!" Booms a voice.
"It is I, Crazychook of Muffin"
"What do you demand, tell me, mere chicken!"
"I want a devil, to stoke the fire in my oven."

Knock, knock, knockin' on limbos door
"Who goes where?" Whimpers a voice.
"It is I, who, what, when, where of how."
"Want do you something, me chicken, tell?"
"I want a limbo man, to confuse the shit out of everyone."

Author notes

Lol I don't know...it's too early in the morning xD

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  • Setmeonfiretwice
    October 22
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    You just knocked my brain out of my head D:


  • Itisivon
    October 10

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    !!!


  • Fulabeans
    October 9

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    LMAO!

    you never cease to amaze me, Amelia. Your randomness is matched by none. I love you for your ability to make me laugh at the most impossible times.

    Well done,
    -Dustin Wustin-

    • Crazychook
      October 10
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      IMPOSSIBLE TIMES?! There are no such things. Guess what. My hand started bleeding at work and I didn't notice until I got annoyed because my hand was hurting. And I looked at it and thought "Hmm...that would be why."


  • Wickedruby1 gold member
    October 9
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    Very good

    I think you left out a word in the next to last line.This is very comical, got a smile out of me, had to be good writing


  • Kastor
    October 8

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    shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
    Bookmarked.
    Featured.
    You. Are. Awesome!


    • Crazychook
      October 9
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      I like what you've done with your mushroom cloud bomb. Nice knees by the way.


  • She Hides Her Pain silver member
    October 8

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    Amelia this was well written. It was funny. You could so use that as a joke. Lol. Girl you can be funny and write. I luffles you.


  • Nini---x
    October 7

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    You make me laugh everytime ' melia

    but always in the best way! You're awesome
    keep it up!
    NiniBABY x)


    • Crazychook
      October 8
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      I aim to laugh, or chuckle...even smile at the least But no cackling!


  • Cup-a-Joe
    October 7
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    Who be knocking on that door? Oh one with many chickens.
    Wo-nd-er-f-u-ll-y written.

    Joe


  • Everlasting Ellen
    October 7

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    ARGH... DISASTROUS...? NO...

    but ...

    CONFUSING? YES

    Illogical? YES

    CRAZY? YES

    DOES IT WORK? YESSSSSS and I dunno why or how but it works as a poem!!!

    Okayish? NO

    OUTSTANDING?: YESSSSSSS




    SOOOOOOO CHOOKISH... it cannot be more ... it cannot be less


    • Crazychook
      October 8
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      Non-disastrous, confusing, illogical, crazy, it works, and outstanding...It's a recipe for Crazychook.


  • Afe-la
    October 6

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    -shakes head slowly- There is something wrong with you Chooken, something terribly wrong.
    But this is good fun, and really, quite intelligently written.
    Have you got a real writer locked in your cupboard?

    • Crazychook
      October 8
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      I know this, you know this *whispers* but they don't! IT'S THEM!!! ARGHHH! *hides behind you* Don't let them get me

      And yes I do...a rare collectors item...don't worry I feed him morsels of food and water.

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