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Stupid

S.mart
T.alented
U.nique
P.erfect
I.deas
D.reamer

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 8

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    I like that for a 9 year old you have a wonderful thought of life and words Some people like to be cruel but you've penned this and given the cruelty a new meaning in a better way

    Well done
    I hope you enjoy AllPoetry and continue to share your words with us
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  • myusikah
    October 6

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    That is so stupid...

    ...

    Stupidly brilliant!
    When I read this, I think of the discrimination some kids have to go through for being thinkers, and being more than just "the funny kid" or "that athlete."

    It's really retarded how others call what matters "stupid" just because they don't understand this world that the creative have invented for themselves.

    I know this poem is just an acrostic or well....more like an anagram, but it just really made me think a little. To me, it was thought provoking.
    I liked it. It's simple, and it makes the reader wonder.

    I'm not so sure what you wanted people to think when they read this, but I'll tell you one thing.

    Your poem...it's the in-between, fuzzy sort of gray for all the matters that appear black and white at first glance.

    -->pia♫♪