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Pathos

I once had so much conviction
lost in a spiral of hazy eyes
I was once numb to the world,
no more.
I can see so vividly now,
and I wish I was blind again.

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short and sweet. thats the best i can do.. my attention seems dwindling when it comes to writing.

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  • illusive
    October 7
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    The return of your poetry & it did not disappoint.

  • it was short and to the point, but I liked the word choice, it captured me and pulled me in great piece...