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Opaque Life

Opaque
membrane of life
swathing, suffocating;
madness of yesterday relived.
Tainted haze shadowing my certainty,
swallowing the venomous truth
like a blind thief engulfed,
making my life
opaque.

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Option 3- Dense fog, mist over eyes..

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 7

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    Beautifully written
    Such a rawness of thoughts
    and the feelings are haunting
    Thank you and best wishes

    Julie