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Fluid



I am
drawn to you
by violent gravity
and soothed again
by your naked waters.
You are the rhythm
of my heartbeat,
my shore line.


© Oisin

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  • tara wilson gold member
    October 6
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  • Night Hope gold member
    October 6

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    Gorgeous as always, Scribe. Glad I checked my "newest by favorites" before I logged off. Good to see you writing again, too.